Formerly Badass Horrible Poetry

This isn't just a poetry blog. Let's be honest, a lot of what I post is poetry but there are more often than not also postings about short stories. I do try to keep this blog separate from my others and post strictly creative work here. Some of it will be better than others, and much of it is in first or second draft stage when posted. These are raw works, and there will be spelling and grammar troubles at times because I use this blog to gauge what works and what doesn't. I use it as a place to get feedback. That's the reason it is "horrible". Because it's not finished-- And why should it be? We all want feedback but most of us are too afraid to put ourselves out there.

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Monday, May 25, 2015

Remnants - part 1

flakes fall off the wall
crusted and buttered
the wall has made a sandwich
its wrapper pulled
peeling away
to a clotted grey
grey been put in a box
the box of brown? Box of mustard dip?
The box of white is broken
though the quality of layers
from her is thick
world tossed inside the box
grated like cheese through a siv
tattered paper
ripped by a skulking cat
mosaic of hipsters

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